My Services

Together, we will

Build Characters rooted in deep Shadow Work and Character psychology,

Clarify your Worldbuilding,

Diagnose Structural Issues…

You don’t have to do it alone.

THE BONES: Building the Foundation of Story

ABRACADABRA! Full Manuscript Evaluation

FIRE! Write as you go! $10/ page

THE BONES: Building the Foundation of Story

Do you have a great idea for a story but aren’t quite sure where to start or how to write it?

Our bones are our infrastructure, just as a story needs a foundation. With this package, you will unlock the hidden secrets trapped in the corner of your brain by following step by step exercises to get the creative juices flowing.

Option 1: The Spine: Building the Backbone of Story – $399
With this Package

We will work together as I help you develop the backbone of your story prior to writing your first draft. This process will begin with brainstorming how to start and end your novel by determining the point of your story, your character’s deepest desires, and the why of it all.

Week 1: Building the Backbone
- Worksheet 1: Includes 4 exercises to begin the story writing process
- Exploring your deep-rooted desire to write this book
- Creating the universal concept of the point of your story
- Developing an extensive understanding of your protagonist
Week 2: Character Development
- Worksheet 2: Includes 2 exercises that develops character motivation and backstory
- An extensive dive into the stakes of your protagonist
- Writing a scene of your protagonist’s misbelief
Week 3: All Characters Must Change
- Worksheet 3: Includes 3 intense exercises
- Sketching out the plot utilizing Cause & Effect Trajectory
- Writing an Opening Scene
- Writing the Closing Scene
Option 2: The Skeleton – $799
With this Package

This is an extended version of The Spine. With this package you will develop the following…
- Worksheet 1: Includes 6 exercises to begin the story writing process
- Exploring your deep-rooted desire to write this book
- Creating the universal concept of the point of your story
- Understanding where your story fits in the market
- Developing an elevator pitch to describe what you’re writing
Week 2: Character Development
- Worksheet 2: Includes 5 exercises to develop character, character motivation, and backstory
- Deciding on Point of View
- Narration
- Developing a fully flushed out main character
- Expanding on the motivations of the main character
- Creating backstory, complete with misbeliefs and an origin story
- 45 minute call
Week 3/4: World Building & Plot Development
- Note: This section may take more than one week to complete and is open for further discussion.
- Worksheet 3: Includes 3 intense exercises
- Developing a world that is believable for the readers
- Sketching out the plot utilizing Cause & Effect Trajectory
- Understanding where to start and end the story
Week 4/5: All Characters Must Change
- Worksheet 4: These 3 exercises will begin with writing exercises that the main character begins in one place and winds up in another through the process of change
- Writing an Opening Scene
- Writing the Ah-Ha Moment
- Writing the Final Scene
- 45 minute call
Week 5/6: Putting it all Together
- Worksheet 5: There are two exercises in the final section
- Developing an Inside Outline: This exercise will take time, as it entails understanding both the internal, as well as external drive of the main character as she moves through the story
- Reevaluating what your story is about

ABRACADABRA! Full Manuscript Evaluation

Transform your manuscript from good to great with this a full and comprehensive analysis of your story’s organic development throughout the story.

A developmental edit gives you the big‑picture guidance, emotional clarity, and structural insight that turns a rough manuscript into a powerful, cohesive, unforgettable book. My goal is to help you create a strong, clear, and memorable story that keeps readers intrigued from the first page until the last.

If you are receiving rejections such as… Didn’t pique my interest; We are not enthusiastic enough about this work; Isn’t something we’d like to pursue; Close, but not quite; Revise & Resubmit; or no response at all.

Find out where your manuscript falls short with traditional agents/ publishers.

A Full Manuscript Developmental Edit offers you

Insight into your characters’ motivations, emotional arcs, and internal narrative

Guidance on worldbuilding clarity and consistency

A clear analysis of your plot, pacing, and story structure

Identification of plot holes, contradictions, and missing pieces

Suggestions for restructuring scenes or strengthening turning points

A detailed editorial letter outlining what’s working, what needs attention, and how to revise effectively

This is big‑picture editing designed to elevate your entire manuscript
What You’ll Experience
- A deeper understanding of your story’s strengths, weaknesses, and recommended changes
- Guidance on character development full of desires, misbeliefs, stakes and consequences
- A clear path forward for revision
- A plot that makes sense and builds tension
- A world that feels intentional and immersive
- Renewed excitement for your next draft
You won’t just know what to change — you’ll know how to change it.
What you’ll receive

A full and comprehensive analysis of your manuscript

A 6 – 10 page developmental letter, focusing on the overall story structure

Generous inline comments throughout the manuscript

A 60 minute Coaching Call to discuss my findings and together, we can develop next steps to bring your story to life

$7.00/ per page
Min. 40K Words Per Manuscript

1:1 Book Coaching

This service is an ongoing personal writing service that supports your story. Together, we will develop a strategic approach that both strengthens the craft of writing and helps move through your story with clarity.

What You’ll Experience

High-touch collaboration

Individualized guidance

Personalized partnership

Accountability

A clarified vision on your story

A strong foundation in character, plot, worldbuilding, and structure
What you’ll receive

Personalized Monthly Coaching

Established deadlines

Receive expert feedback of what’s working and what’s not, and next steps to refine your writing skills

How to write with intention, rather than guessing

2, 45-minute coaching calls per month

$500/ Month with a 3 month minimum

FIRE! Write as you go! $10/ page

This service is designed for writers who have completed The Bones: Building Foundation of Story

Professional feedback that is open and honest
Clarity on big picture issues, including setting/world-building, structure, plot, and character consistency
Generous Inline Comments
One 1-3 Page Editorial Feedback Letter per submission package
A proposed revision plan per submission package
One 45-minute Feedback Call per submission sequence

*All submitted pages must follow standard submission requirements: Roman Times, 12 pt font, double spaced

For more information about RAD’s pricing packages, contact me today. I look forward to hearing from you.

Testimonials

It doesn’t matter what your favorite writing genre is…. fantasy, science fiction, historical fiction, romance, or mystery, Rebecca sees the larger picture. From the attention grabber opening line to a workable plot and even pacing, she’ll make sure everything flows well. With her eye for details, she’ll find those nagging problems others have missed. I’m thankful for all the help she has given me.

My Services

Together, we will

Build Characters rooted in deep Shadow Work and Character psychology,

Clarify your Worldbuilding,

Diagnose Structural Issues…

You don’t have to do it alone.

THE BONES: Building the Foundation of Story

ABRACADABRA! Full Manuscript Evaluation

1:1 Book Coaching

FIRE! Write as you go! $10/ page

Group Courses

THE BONES: Building the Foundation of Story

Option 1: The Spine: Building the Backbone of Story – $399

Option 2: The Skeleton – $799

ABRACADABRA! Full Manuscript Evaluation

A Full Manuscript Developmental Edit offers you

What You’ll Experience

What you’ll receive

1:1 Book Coaching

What You’ll Experience

What you’ll receive

FIRE! Write as you go! $10/ page

Testimonials

-Emily Elliff, Author of the Marty and Marie Cozy Mystery Series