Pricing Packages

THE BONES: Building the Foundation of Story

Do you have a great idea for a story but aren’t quite sure where to start or how to write it? 

Our bones are our infrastructure, just as a story needs a foundation. With this package, you will unlock the hidden secrets trapped in the corner of your brain by following step by step exercises to get the creative juices flowing.

Option 1: The Spine: Building the Backbone of Story

$399 One-Time Payment

With this Package

We will work together as I help you develop the backbone of your story prior to writing your first draft. This process will begin with brainstorming how to start and end your novel by determining the point of your story, your character’s deepest desires, and the why of it all.

Week 1:          Building the Backbone

• Worksheet 1: Includes 4 exercises to begin the story writing process
  • Exploring your deep-rooted desire to write this book
  • Creating the universal concept of the point of your story
  • Developing an extensive understanding of your protagonist
  • Beginning the first steps in your worldbuilding process

Week 2:          Character Development

• Worksheet 2: Includes 2 exercises that develops character motivation and backstory
  • An extensive dive into the stakes of your protagonist
  • Writing a scene of your protagonist’s misbelief

Week 3:          All Characters Must Change

• Worksheet 3: Includes 3 intense exercises
  • Sketching out the plot utilizing Cause & Effect Trajectory
  • Writing an Opening Scene
  • Writing the Closing Scene

Option 2: The Skeleton

$799 One-Time Payment

With this Package

This is an extended version of The Spine. With this package you will develop the following…

• • Worksheet 1: Includes 6 exercises to begin the story writing process
    • Exploring your deep-rooted desire to write this book
    • Creating the universal concept of the point of your story
    • Understanding where your story fits in the market
    • Developing an elevator pitch to describe what you’re writing

  Week 2:          Character Development

  • Worksheet 2: Includes 5 exercises to develop character, character motivation, and backstory
    • Deciding on Point of View
    • Narration
    • Developing a fully flushed out main character
    • Expanding on the motivations of the main character
    • Creating backstory, complete with misbeliefs and an origin story
    • 45 minute call

  Week 3/4:       World Building & Plot Development

  • Note: This section may take more than one week to complete and is open for further discussion.
  • Worksheet 3: Includes 3 intense exercises
    • Developing a world that is believable for the readers
    • Sketching out the plot utilizing Cause & Effect Trajectory
    • Understanding where to start and end the story

  Week 4/5:       All Characters Must Change

  • Worksheet 4: These 3 exercises will begin with writing exercises that the main character begins in one place and winds up in another through the process of change
    • Writing an Opening Scene
    • Writing the Ah-Ha Moment
    • Writing the Final Scene
    • 45 minute call

  Week 5/6:       Putting it all Together

  • Worksheet 5: There are two exercises in the final section
    • Developing a Inside Outline: This exercise will take time, as it entails understanding both the internal, as well as external drive of the main character as she moves through the story
    • Reevaluating the what your story is about

ABRACADABRA! Full Manuscript Evaluation

Transform your manuscript from good to great with this a full and comprehensive analysis of your story’s organic development throughout the story.

A developmental edit gives you the big‑picture guidance, emotional clarity, and structural insight that turns a rough manuscript into a powerful, cohesive, unforgettable book. My goal is to help you create a strong, clear, and memorable story that keeps readers intrigued from the first page until the last.

If you are receiving rejections such as… Didn’t pique my interest; We are not enthusiastic enough about this work; Isn’t something we’d like to pursue; Close, but not quite; Revise & Resubmit; or no response at all. Find out where your manuscript falls short with traditional agents/ publishers.

A Full Manuscript Developmental Edit offers you

• Insight into your characters’ motivations, emotional arcs, and internal narrative
• Guidance on worldbuilding clarity and consistency
• A clear analysis of your plot, pacing, and story structure
• Identification of plot holes, contradictions, and missing pieces
• Suggestions for restructuring scenes or strengthening turning points
• A detailed editorial letter outlining what’s working, what needs attention, and how to revise effectively
• This is big‑picture editing designed to elevate your entire manuscript

What You’ll Experience

• A deeper understanding of your story’s strengths, weaknesses, and recommended changes
• Guidance on character development full of desires, misbeliefs, stakes and consequences
• A clear path forward for revision
• A plot that makes sense and builds tension
• A world that feels intentional and immersive
• Renewed excitement for your next draft

You won’t just know what to change — you’ll know how to change it.

What you’ll receive

• A full and comprehensive analysis of your manuscript
• A 6 – 10 page developmental letter, focusing on the overall story structure
• Generous inline comments throughout the manuscript
• A 60 minute Coaching Call to discuss my findings and together, we can develop next steps to bring your story to life

$0.03/ per word One-Time Payment
Min. 40K Words Per Manuscript

FIRE! Write as you go! $10/ page is perfect for writers who want clarity, accountability, and professional feedback, offering:

• Professional feedback that is open and honest
• Clarity on big picture issues, including setting/world-building, structure, plot, and character consistency
• Targeted guidance of your next steps in the writing process
• Generous Inline Comments
• One 1-3 Page Editorial Feedback Letter per submission package
• A proposed revision plan per submission package
• One 45-minute Feedback Call per submission sequence

*All submitted pages must follow standard submission requirements: Roman Times, 12 pt font, double spaced

THE END IS UPON US! (Find Your Place in the World): 

You’ve completed your manuscript and are ready to pitch to agents. This should be an exciting time but once again your rejections are piling up, stating, Not quite a right fit; Not quite right for our publication; Not suitable for us; No room for more clients, or no response at all. Let me help you refine your first ten pages, create an eye-catching query, and a powerful synopsis suitable for the right literary agents.

$1500 One-Time Payment

Writer Takeaways

• A Comprehensive Pitch Strategy
• Up to 6 edits of your query letter
• Up to 6 edits of your synopsis letter
• Up to 3 edits of your first ten pages
• 15 – 30 Agents/ Publishers List specifically tailored to your story
• A 60 minute Coaching Call
• Confidence moving into the pitching process